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I sent out the first draft of my book in basic SEO to a few people and got great feedback. I’ve rewritten it with that feedback in mind. I’m about ready to put it all into a nice graphic format so it looks pretty and reads easily. I’m pretty happy with it.
Untangling The Web
I’m also working with my wife to redesign the existing site to aim at the handmade crowd. It seems that the people who make stuff at home and want to sell it on line are my kind of people. I want to help and have the information that they really need. It seems like a really good fit to me.
We also talked about the tag line of “understandable guide”, which one person thought was boring. OK, at least one person thought that enough to actually say it, but I don’t know how many actually thought it. We came up with some other thoughts, which didn’t thrill me, then we hit on “Untangling the Web”. That’s totally what I do. I take this big, ‘ol mess that the world wide web is and break it down into small, easy to chew, bite sized pieces.
What is out there can be a mess and trying to figure out how to make your way through it all can be a mess. I can untangle all of that for you.
I’m loving the new tag line. What do you think of “Untangling The Web”?
I like “Untangling the Web”. Do you want to specify for who in the title? “Untangling the Web for the Unlikely Entrepreneur” Needs to convey a message so I won’t be afraid to pick it up. Perhaps splashes of words on the cover or in the background like….Housewives, Teenagers, College Grad., Middle Aged, Retraining…you know, hope for the hopeless. My two cents. You are off to a great start.
Deborah
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hey Conrad,
I think it’s a great tag line… but it sounds too good to be true. That is, I wonder if there are already a lot of people using it. That said, I’ve never heard it before, so maybe not too many people are. It certainly conveys what you are trying to do.
~ Steve
PS. Deborah has a good point above, maybe add “for the do-it-yourself’er” or something like that… which would make it more unique.
@Steve
The domain name is parked with ads on it, so no one is using that specifically. It seems like a good name to me, so I’m going to start using it and see what happens.
Not sure about the added line, but it does need a little something. I’ll keep thinking about it.
Thanks for the comment.
You build trade show displays? Maybe our clients are the same kinds of people and we should work together.